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    1. The memoir offers strong visual imagery and descriptive details so the reader can visualize the setting, context and characters. However, I wish you had offered a little more to convey the energy and novelty of Purple Rain and Prince himself.

    2. The memoir has a thesis statement that addresses the challenges of achieving independence in one's media consumption choices through a "covert operation."

    3. The memoir has a attention-getting opening and compelling closing paragraph.

    4. There is no use of dialogue even though this might be very effective to illustrate the shift in your thinking after viewing the film and discovering that the movie was enjoyed by responsible people.

    5. There is a clear sense of the author's voice or personality in the writing. Fine work here!

    6. There are few spelling, grammar or usage errors. Remember to use italics to indicate the titles of films.

    7. Your byline identifies the author and the phrase "Edited by NAME HERE" appears at the bottom of the page.

    8. If the words or ideas of other authors are presented in the memoir, a works cited list is included using APA format.
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